Comments : As It Drops To The Ear

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I was looking at new site members and found your poem. I enjoyed reading this. Has a sense of hope to your words. These 3 lines are powerful:

    Loves soft, mending
    Will find its way
    Inside all of this

    In this line did you intend to use seems or seams and its, I think should be it's.

    Find the seems as its in your daydreams

    Overall very well written. Welcome to the site by the way. Nice to see new members.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelin Hurt

    Thanks for the comment but I think I messed this one up.