Interesting poem, like a thought stream, written in double meanings, it's not easy to guess the extent of your writing, only the dilema, so it could be applied to horrible circumstances or meh. So it can relate to lots of different situ. however, i am intruiged, and i liked the rhyming pattern.

After reading this poem I wanted to tell you to grab what you can in this life soak in you triumphs and wallow in your glories forget all the wrongs after trying to right,yet never betray a love if its to be then let it be don't fool with it grasp it. Yet what do I know I lost who I thought was the one true love in my life and did the opposite wallowed in my sadness and and grovelled in my misery before God in his wisdom with the help of family help find me somebody I love just as much of not more. One thing though the longer you leave it the harder it gets to do it.
A thought provoking poem with a depth that surprised me. This being the four of your poems I have read is probably the best yet the other three were excellent just this one got to me 5/5 Ray S