Comments : The Times When...

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Audrey,

    This was straight from the heart, I could truly see that. Sometimes we find such a person, that becomes our whole world and we never want to be without them..

    Please hold on,
    I'll find a way to show,
    That I want you back,
    Don't let go!

    ^^
    This brought tears to my eyes, I have been there so many times in my life and prayed so hard I would not lose someone dear.

    Good work, I enjoyed this poem very much:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid