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Hey, I love this poem. Its very well written and the rhythm and rhyme is perfect. Except on this line:
"I hate how you did this,
And that you know how much I care."
The second line kinda throws you off I think you should have it"
I hate how you did this,
Knowing how much I care.
Thats just my opinion, adding extra words make is longer than the you want it to bo. Other than that I love it, very well done.
Omg I hate spelling errors lol last line I meant adding extra words makes it longer than you'd want it to be**