Comments : Under Study

  • 9 years ago

    by just ashley

    This poem is so sad. the flow isreally good.

    I'm sorry for so many things, so many unspokens
    most of all i'm sorry I couldn't save you from choking.

    this is my favorite part even if its really sad. great job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This is a very sad write, the repitition of the words 'im sorry' was used very well =]

    The flow was carried through nicely and the rhyming was very good. A short poem but one that held a lot of emotion and got the point across.

  • 8 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I just felt like this piece was missing something. Depth, perhaps. Or strength.

    (I don't mean this a an insult, by the way.)


    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem you read.