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by just ashley
This poem is so sad. the flow isreally good.
I'm sorry for so many things, so many unspokens
most of all i'm sorry I couldn't save you from choking.
this is my favorite part even if its really sad. great job.
by Nobodys Hero
This is a very sad write, the repitition of the words 'im sorry' was used very well =]
The flow was carried through nicely and the rhyming was very good. A short poem but one that held a lot of emotion and got the point across.
by Bradley Peter
I just felt like this piece was missing something. Depth, perhaps. Or strength.
(I don't mean this a an insult, by the way.)
P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem you read.