Comments : Let Him Walk

  • 14 years ago

    by Skyfire

    "So let him walk,
    Because sometimes,
    Letting them walk
    Is better than asking them to stay."

    What a powerful end! Good write.

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this poem is so beautiful! It's so inspiring! I loove it! I can actually relate to it but this poem really made me feel better... I really think it's very nicely done! I just noticed that the were some typos and I know that from when you post the poem so next time just make sure you check it is normal before you post it. Other than that, it was perfect! Great job!