Comments : But I think...

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I know,
    Your tender hands will rise,
    To efface this poignant globule
    And help my lips curve
    Gently; upwards-
    It'll be painful for you;
    It'll hurt me...
    ...But I think, I won't let you see.

    *I loved this stanza. Wow...this was such a different and creative poem. I loved it. It's so fresh with ideas and concepts. I love the style...it's so new and original. I felt like you told a very sad story in such a beautiful way. Wow...this was flawless. Your diction blew me away as well. Keep it up hun. Nik*