Comments : Do I Need To Fight...?

  • 14 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Great poem! I'm sure many people can relate. It sucks to have a love that isn't returned :/ great words and nice structure here :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    It's horrible to love somebody that doesn't love you back but it's worse when they pretend too. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Biya

    If you will give up or face the challenges inside.

    Your love to her is just like a river,
    Whose clear and fresh water continues to run
    To give life to those living things around it
    And balance the ecosystem of this world

    Lovely lines.....

    5/5
    Lovely poem