This is short but very good! You can feel despair in the words...well done!

The old adages are the best, 'Short but sweet'. I love this poems title and its simplicity, yet with hidden complexities another excellent piece from your excellent repertoire. Ray S 5/5

The old adages are the best, 'Short but sweet'. I love this poems title and its simplicity, yet with hidden complexities another excellent piece from your excellent repertoire. Ray S 5/5

Simple, yet exquisite. Just Wonderful. :)(:

Short and fly. lol. it was good for being so short. i give it a 5/5, even though I wished it to be longer. ttyl.