Comments : Creature In The Dark

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    So true, we ourselves are what we should fear! well done...I liked the rhyme scheme you used...it worked well for this poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    How many times in my life have I woken in a cold sweat only to see myself in my dressing table mirror. Your poem truly had me back there feeling like I had a hundred times before the dark fear that our dreams sometimes bring us and the sudden waking for no apparent reason. Brilliant and well written all an excellent poem should have 5/5 Ray S

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    How many times in my life have I woken in a cold sweat only to see myself in my dressing table mirror. Your poem truly had me back there feeling like I had a hundred times before the dark fear that our dreams sometimes bring us and the sudden waking for no apparent reason. Brilliant and well written all an excellent poem should have 5/5 Ray S

  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    The feeling is known.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I loved reading this :) Very funny... and very true! HaHa. Well done!

    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Lol always happens to me. xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It might not be laugh out loud funny but all of us who have been through this can see the humor in your words. Well done.