Comments : La la la la

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A very sad poem you have penned Jay, Lol. It broke my heart to read it. Your pain and anguish can be felt in every line... I pray Jay that soon the darkness will lift/disappear for you, and that the sun will shine bringing a brighter day. Hold on Jay, be strong... and don't give up. Lol. Fight this, beat it... and win.

    take care,
    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by danielle

    Your reallly talented i liked the poem it was very sad and emotional but it was good keep up the good work