Comments : My paranoia

  • 14 years ago

    by fakesmile

    This is reallie gooood... but u should really changed the structure of your poetry.. anywayz its a nice poem.. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    I agree with the first comment. You should change your structure, you'll get many more reviews that way and the rhythm will be cleaner.

    Great job with creativity and imagery.

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