'Tanlged in my darkest thought'
`Tangled

'It pricks and prods for explosion
so my sanity starts erosion.'
`Very well written, probably the most original lines Ive read today!

'
GET OUT.
GET OUT.
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!'
`Such powerful words and writing them in caps and putting "!!!!" after really emphasizes the anger of the reader to the fullest extent.

A good poem about how something has stuck in your mind from the past and you cant get it out of your mind and it feels like you are losing your sanity.

Jen I totally love this poem. It's just so raw and filled with anger. I like how you used caps for the repeated stanza...it just shouts to the readers.
Great Job

Woh... This is an awesome write, that's full of emotion, that you have so well expressed. I love the style, the wording, the rhyming.... EVERYTHING about this poem. You are quite a writer :)

Very impressive.
Olwin.