Comments : If Only

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Love this. If only we could do that, turn back the time to a happier childhood and those games we played, hear the laughter. The good old days. (smiles)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You are absolutely right..childhood flies by so fast, but its something fun to look back on, I remember those days when I played hop-scotch and hide and seek ;) Its amazing how we all grow up so fast! Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Kerry Gardiner

    Love the poem cindy, i thought you did great on it. and I remember playing those games back in the day even though im not too old, great work, keep it up.

    much love

    kerry gardiner

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Loved the poem. Those are games that even I miss at my age. It's a part of us that we give up to be adults :-( I vowed to never grow up . Not sure what happened
    Loved this Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I love poems about children and childhood days :) and I LOVED this poem. It's brilliant Cindy! We don't see many children playing these games now... How I use to enjoy playing all of these!... And I enjoyed your poem... EMMENSELY. Thankyou for it!

    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Jump rope, hop scotch, hide-n-seek
    Ghost stories late at night
    Secrets shared in the dark
    Giggling till morning light

    I didnt jumped on ropes but all the games you mentioned takes me back to my childhood and put a smile on my face.

    Childhood passes quickly by
    Turn your head and it is gone
    Leaving only memories
    Of all our joyous songs

    This is so very true, i really wish that i could have my childhood back but then i also rem, back in time i always wanted to grow up, human nature.

    If only we could turn back time
    Relive those carefree days
    Filled with love and happiness
    Laughter echoing as we played

    The magic word here is 'If Only'.
    Loved the poem, such refreshing, very light poem but with great power to bring a smile on reader's face.
    Loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Nice write, mom. 5/5. it'd be nice if those days would last. you dont realize how much you miss them till they are long gone.

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    Yes, if only we could turn back time. But my friend, we ought to look forward to a bright future always.. As long as we're living and breathing fresh air, we can be big children. You don't have to grow up you know:p As the saying goes, never take life too seriously, you never get out of it alive anyways.

    I hope by the time i'm 60 ( i hope i reach that age) i'll still be acting goofy and laughing out loud. lol.

    wonderful poem. 5/5 no doubt. Peace, W.

  • 14 years ago

    by Nicko

    What a lovely short poem its such an easy poem to relate to. Great first verse setting the tone of the whole piece

    Ghost stories late at night
    Giggling till morning light

    I loved the way you constructed the rhyme of these two lines.

    Childhood passes quickly by
    Turn your head and it is gone
    Leaving only memories
    Of all our joyous songs

    This verse continues the theme and has good flow and meter

    If only we could turn back time
    Relive those carefree days
    Filled with love and happiness
    Laughter echoing as we played

    Yes if only we could turn back time, but your poem helped turn back the clock, to relive those days that are so precious. Well done, all in all a great little poem.

    Cheerz Nick