That was beautiful. Your words really touch the reader, took my breath away! And the ending, wow, there are no words to describe...5/5!

mandy :)

This is a beautifully written sad poem, that truely touched my heart to read, Lol. It's very well written and expressed.Well done.

All the best, and take care,
Olwin.

A sad poem of intense emotions. Well done. You are a great asset to P&Q
Very Impressive

Very sad piece. It is very hard when you lose someone you love. The worst pain I have ever felt. The pain doesn't go away it just becomes pat of who we are.
Good Job!
Take care
Cindy

Such a sad yet powerful poem. It's hard losing someone we are close to. People say it gets easier but I don't think it does. A very beautiful piece, 5/5. Em x