This is incredible...
its so well rehearsed
each line has originality.
and you captured it so well.
i can relate strongly too it

A very humbling poem. it is almost like i can feel the shame that this emits and i find the feeling all too familiar.

soo many emotions make it seem somewhat chaotic, but it works well with the title and ending. it almost seems like a rising noise in your head, but then grows silent after saying, "please, no more questions."

Very well written, you've written your mind, i know most do , but in this one you've literally spoken what you feel.. the smothering on the inside,agitation and all.
Can relate to it , totally.