Comments : I'll Stay

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A beautiful write... that touched my heart and soul... Wonderfully worded and expressed.

    P.S... I loved the "fire" and "water" images you used to convey the person's distress and you rescuing them from it.

    Very Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You are quite the amazing writer Jen, all your poems flow with perfection! This one was not any different, a great friendship write dedicated to someone you hold dear and will not let go. You're a great person and this poem only shows more of who you truly are :) A beautiful write. I'm sure this person is glad to have you as their friend, for you will not leave them.