Comments : I love you in your sleep

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Needs a bit of editing at the beginning and on the last line
    1st stanza L2 were & L3 Kissed
    last stanza L4 you missed an I (just as much as I love you)

    Yet another lovely easy metered poem that gets your message across with its simply beautiful flow, Ray S 5/5