This was an awesome poem. very descriptive and had a lovely flow to it . keep writing my friend you have talent

This poem got an award from poetry.com look up valerie zamora....and you'll see this poem there

and thanks for the comment :)

Awesomely dark, i love at the beginning when its all about direction. like i dunno if it was intentional but using traffic light colours? then at the end 'BOO' actually scared me a little :P! xx

Haha lol thx....