Comments : Corruption of the mind

  • 14 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Aw I love this poem, it's really insightfull and very well written. I love the way you think and the words you say just really get to me :) I wish you could read this one to me.
    I hope you didn't write this from personal experience, especially getting drunk and having sex with a random girl :P 5/5 I <3 it!!

  • I like this poems alot. Really think its one of the best ones I've read in a while maybe with the fact I can in ways connect to it.Idk but good job. Very simple and Keeps to the point. good Job. 5/5