I can 100% relate to this and you make it very clear what you are feeling. By making the sentences short and use of short but meaningful words you made this poem very good. 5/5

Beautifully written. i love how the meaning just yells at you. i loved it, i relate to it very well. great job 5/5

*Val

Sometimes when we are angry we say things that are brutally honest, but those feelings are supposed to fade with time. thats why they say that time heals all wounds. i've felt this way before, but i've never stayed that angry for very long. its too much work to stay that angry for long periods of time.

but this was still a nice showing of feelings that you portrayed. good job

~Ben