This was really good. I loved it.

I know exactly how that is. That is how I lived for bout a year. It's very good. I love it

Focus more on the content of you poem then how you are writing it. Poetry isn't all about rhyme. good work,..keep writing and you're sure to get better.

I Love It.
Defiantly Can Relate.

I Love It.
Defiantly Can Relate.