Great poem. It is great how everything is so musically related yet real in a person like way...Perhaps I should of just said Personification of music....Anyway. Good job on the poem 5/5! Keep writing and smiling.
Caught up in the emotions of the show
Velvet vocals flooding my enchanted soul
*This was my favorite stanza. I really love the way you write. The flow is flawless and your emotions are clearly and strongly represented throughout the poem. I think you did a wonderful job with this. Keep it up :) Nik*
It is wonderful to read a poem from you once again. Nitin is so right you haven't lost your magic. I can feel the sadness coming from your words. Yet also I get a feeling of hope.
I really enjoyed reading this poem. For me the metaphor between a piece of music and this person works quite well to describe not only their personality but also what this person meant to you. It's a beautifully crafted poem that holds some very real emotions in it. Wonderful. You'll get my vote :)