Wow can I relate to this I watched my mother in law and my father die and this poem tells it all love it 5/5

Tammi,

Awww..what a sad poem. This was so strong! I loved it. The flow was amazing and I felt so much pain from this. You told such a powerful story with such simple words and images. A really great poem hun. Nik :)

Awts! Too sad poems.. I felt the emotion inside you by reading this. great poem. Keep writing

The pain of watching a love one die. Its a sad thought simply watching my bird die was bad enough. nice work

Very sad poem. I wish you didn't have to see that or feel that. It flows great, good word choice and painting the images in my mind.
5/5
~Kitty

Wow. this so emotional, so painful. amazing, really

So sorry for your loss. Excellent poem though and great way to express your emotions. Thanks for the advice on my latest poem. As you can see I have made the changes. Keep writing you have great talent! 5/5