Comments : Unseen Tears

  • 14 years ago

    by Second to None

    I love this poem espcialy the end. =]

  • 14 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Loved it! I USED to feel like this and for some reason I think its coming back.

    " can't cry in front of them.
    That would be too much.
    I won't let them see me falling apart. "

    I ALWAYS feel this, I try to never cry in front of people. Loved this write, rhythm was very good.