Comments : Portrait

  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    The first thing I thought was.. If you love me then why talk all that shit behind my back!! LOL nice write bro it would make a good song, whats the choris?

  • 14 years ago

    by Esther

    It's patchy, I think this would do better as a song than as a poem, but I am loving it anyway, 'They say joy comes in the morning
    And sorrows flood the night' I really enjoyed, just because I loved how that flowed in my mind. Great poem. :D