Comments : Summer (String Haiku)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Summer is my favorite season I think. I love it when the flowers are in full bloom, the warmth of the sun, cool breezes and you are right in that summer if full of life. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Starlight

    Very intriguing. The title caught my attention, I just had to read it. Very original.

    "Their scent enthralling to me
    My senses they fill"

    My favorite lines, oh.. how wonderful. You made this piece. Summer Is a wonderful season for flowers indeed. Especially there scent lol. Keep it up

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Nice image good word flow. How do you want your iced tea?

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    HaHa... Thankyou Christopher :) ... with a dash of lemon! HeHe.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think flower should be flowers.

    Beautiful poem about Summer! Loved this. You did great. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This poem is a beautiful one about the summer. 5/5, Em