Comments : Resurrection

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    I wonder how this poem didn't get more comments. But I'm not surprised! As I know the trait of this site.
    I think this is one of the best poems I've read in recent times. I liked your style of writing. Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This one is so brilliantly penned...

    a little bit of sarcasm and reality blended togerther to form such intense write...

    loved the structure too... a sense of urgency is there ... wonderful write...

    In a world
    of artificial intelligence
    and artificial flavors,
    of artificial insemination
    and artificial smiles,
    it's difficult
    not to miss
    artificial bliss.

    ^^ right on...brilliant lines and so true... with the artifiality all around we often forget what reality looks like...

    a wonderful read...

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I liked some of the word choice. I didn't care for the overuse of filler words, the repetition or how the lines are fragmented. There is a natural pause at the end of each line so to have the poem structured like this is very distracting.

  • 14 years ago

    by Seth Rowley

    That was a great poem even though I really don't understand what you are trying to tell me