I love it katie, this one shows me a ray of light has peeked in to your world. nice job.

That very last line made me smile, Katie:)

I read a lot in between the lines here, girlie....you know, every new day is a new chance to make a brand new start..there is no need to continue on a path you despise;)

I will tell you something:

I was a very heavy smoker for about twenty years and no one believed me when I said I would quit. I said I would do it on the first day of the new millenium and they all said"huh, that Ingrid chick, who smokes two packages ad day, she will neeeeeeever make it!" and guess what? It's 2009 now and I have not touched a fag since, lol. I sat on my hands for four whole months, sweetheart and I had a really bad cold turkey, because I had no outside help or medicines. I think that when you really want to do something, you can:) YOU CAN!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid
ps: you write really well!

Aw this poem shows a lot of light at the end of the tunnel and it ends happily i do love it. greatly written with such heartfelt.