Comments : The Girl I Want To Be

  • 14 years ago

    by Holly

    I really like this poem. It's really pretty and unfortunate; alot like life. I love it. Good job! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This poem described how I felt when my ex got with the girl he is still with now and it broke my heart that he came to me and told me how he felt for her etc but I was always there to listen. 5/5, Em