Dear Michael,

Such a dark write.

I know how one ends up in such a place, because I was brought there in the same way as you were once.
When a person is born the slate is blank and the parents get the chance to write the first messages on it. To some, such a task is too much repsonsiblity and they abuse this right, to be the first to make a lasting impression on your mind.

Michael, most of what we experience is tainted by our beliefs and experiences and the most difficult task for abused and damaged people is to get rid of the false messages that were written on their slate...only the toughest manage to do so..no outside force or love of a dear one can help you achieve it. You, yourself have to realize that your parents did you wrong and then you will be free of this invisible prison you are in.

Love you, my friend

xx Ingrid

You were recommended and I must thank her for that. I enjoyed this write. It was original and kept me reading with interest. Unique word usage and lay out .

I have missed you and somehow this write until today. Maybe I was meant to read this today because your words echo the dark mood that has captured me in its grasp. Nice to see you back.

Dark unique and excellent 5/5

Excellent, Michael. I love how you seem to purposely strive to change the layout of your poetry - it's always different and fascinating and draws the reader in instantly; it's very pleasing to the eye. And, as ever, backed up with effortless talent, in terms of content.
All the best,
Ben