Wow - intense, so much emotion and the words stick in the readers head.

IBE
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The emotion is def here. There is a few typos that you should maybe correct. there is a little lack of flow also. But it really is good. Going through stuff like this hurts. Good job

suicidalkansas

I hope you're okay hun.
If you need to talk, feel free to PM me at any time, people DO want you here.
I'm here for you.
Annie.