I loved how you talk about them forcing you to smile. great poem

The whole thing with a crush, it does not have enough love at first to keep going strong. it is like an energy boost of sugar, but that sugar tends to fade away, and then u have to move on to other mean. but if u dont have those means, it is bound to fail. Well I have to say that this was an awsome poem, and it deserves a 5/5, ttyl Kitten

WOW - absolutly amazing, i loved reading this from start to finish. a very very insightful piece of work. everything flowed evenly, the structure was great, even the stanza line count. wording fit in quite nicely. love love love this one the most.

excellent work!

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