Comments : I'm Trying

  • 14 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Hey Connor,

    Great poem. I remember this feeling. It's like no matter what you do you can't help but wonder what it would be like with that person. If things had been different would it have worked out differently and so on. Great job. Short, sweet and to the point.

    Rebbeca

  • 14 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    All you need is well power and to know , who left you never cared about you , so why should be cry over