Katie,

Love is the most overwhelming emotion a person can have and the one who is in our heart has the power to either have us soar above the clouds or throw us into the darkest pits of hell....If they care enough, they'll never let you go down there, hunni.

You wrote this down really well...good job:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Most things that fall break in their own ways with rejection or hurt i wish those feelings werent yours. This poem described them deeply well done

I like how you potrayed love in this piece, it's always confusing. Very well written, 5/5. Em x