Raj, a wonderful poem about home. Sounds like a little bit of homesickness. (smiles) Well done with the form as well.

Raj
What a beautiful piece. Graet job on the club challenge as well. I can feel your homesickness.
Love Cindy

This poem is comfort thinking of home. You did a great job. I loved the feel of the read.

At your part of the world nature must be absolutely beautiful:)
I could see it all in my mind, trough this poem.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

That's magnificent and the imagery is so realistic.

I've seen this style all over the place but none as beautiful as the one you've written. I loved reading this. I admire you so much for doing this simply because I can't lol. A very lovely poem hun. Great work :) Nik