Intersting choice of style. It is a good choice, and it is simple yet complicated at the same time. 5/5 on this. ttyl.

Short but very, very dark. Loved it, 5/5. Em

Wow its amazing and yuh have potencial and i love how its all extra short yet has such a deep meaning, yuh proved that blood is thicker then water,return the favor^_^

Sounds like similar dreams I have been experiencing. Sleep paralysis?

Oh and your quote is beautiful. "Searching for a heartbeat in such an empty world....."