What brought this out? i mean it is still a good poem, but poems like this get my blood boiling. 5/5

Witten so well!!! Amazing job. But as PoetryKnight asked sorta, what made u write about something like this? It all flows so smoothly! 5/5

Sstructure and wording are great.could realy feel the emotion.

good job

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Twisted poem this is awesome my friend p&l midnight sky