Comments : Untitled (suggestions?)

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    I like this one as well, is short and simple and its right to the point. It's a great poem to show your dad how you feel about him. As for the title, it is a toughy... How about something like "The things between us" or "There is no doubt" i'm not sure on the title, theyre just suggestions. But anyways, great job on this one