Very good descriptions. The imagery is nicely displayed, appealing to the senses.

'Your eyes are like A sleeping rose'.
Never heard this one before. Quite unique.

Like the contrasts you used.
The rose, the fire. You used them brilliantly in both positive and negative connotations.

'Your words are like a rainbow.
Ever going and never real.'

I believe a rainbow to be real. Even if its just for a moment. But not tangible. I see it as an expression of hope. You know its there but can't hold on to it.

Its just me, but I might write something like

Your words are like a rainbow
Colourful, but without substance

Or

Your words are like a rainbow
Beautifully laid out fading too soon

But its great the way it is. 5/5

AWW! thats really nice.
it took my breath away :)
the substance was good, and i felt like it was right u know what i mean? the comparisons and what not XD !
good job
5outa5.
**bri