This is wonderful but so sad. he knows how much you loved him though even though he is far away you always ahve his memories until you see him again just cling on to what he left for you.

Amazing job, but so sorry you had to go through this. Losing family is always hard, but you can get through it. I love how it flows. Just remember, he can hear you say i love you. everytime it rains, he is crying because he misses you too

A hearfelt poem, Katie...I feel for you, because I lost all my grandparents due to health reasons a long time ago already and would have given anything to be able to talk to them one more time!

Well written!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Ur a really good poet. Its ur best work. i love howo u described everything. Well done.

This poem was written sobeautifully and shows how much you grandad means to you. It brought a tear to my eye because I've recently found out my grandads got cancer and none of us know how long he has left. It's never easy losing someone we are close to. Such a wonderful dedication, 5/5. Em x