Amazing job, but so sorry you had to go through this. Losing family is always hard, but you can get through it. I love how it flows. Just remember, he can hear you say i love you. everytime it rains, he is crying because he misses you too
Ur a really good poet. Its ur best work. i love howo u described everything. Well done.
11 years ago
This poem was written sobeautifully and shows how much you grandad means to you. It brought a tear to my eye because I've recently found out my grandads got cancer and none of us know how long he has left. It's never easy losing someone we are close to. Such a wonderful dedication, 5/5. Em x