Awww!!! i was almost crying!! im so sorry this happened to u! it hurts when u loose someone u love i know. i hope that ur heart will me filed with joy once more! :)

Jessica

I'm so very sorry for your loss. I don't feel as though I could properly comment on all aspects of this poem, because its not the type of thing I like to suggest making changes on. It's too personal and it's YOUR way of grieving and remembering your friend; something that should never be changed.

I know what it's like to lose a friend, I know the grief and the loneliness and how things change over time. Just know that things get better and things get easier and that doesn't mean you're forgetting them - it just means you're doing what they would like.

Sorry again and my heart goes out to their loved ones.

Really sorry about your loss, very heartwrenching poem. It touched me very badly, 5/5. Em x