Comments : What is Love

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex D

    Great poem! you portrayed youre thoughts excellently and gave the reader exactly what he/she deserves with this poem. Overall the flow was good but
    "Of the one who is my one true Love?" could use a different word instead of using one twice
    and
    "My stomach clenches up with my want,
    And my heart aches with my joy,"
    I think these two lines would flow better if you took out the word my! just some suggestions
    Overall good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by vintage darling

    It is wonderful the twinges and feelings that love can give you.
    I'd give this poem a 5/5 cause it speaks from the heart.
    It doesn't matter about structure or anything, because i think that you truly captured the essence of love at its highest point. Love to the feeling of aching.
    my favourite line: My heart aches with joy,

    you wonderful comparisons are what make your poems so beautiful.