Wonderful write Meena... you did a great job with this challenge! Getting lost in a book... I love it! Im not really an avid reader ... but your poem would make me want to go out a buy a book today! HaHa. Great job :)

A good book does the same things for me that you have written about. It takes me to places I have never been and allows me to become a part of other families, imparts knowledge. Well done with the form.

//day sleeps, night begins to drip
lost within a book//

^^ books can really take you to a jouney into dreamland :) when I start with one time tends to cease for me...

interesting write there... a good work with Trochee... :)

Clever write, Meena..this is a very difficult job for someone who's fist language is not English and you pulled it off brilliantly!

Indeed reading books is a way to get lost in a world of its own....so much wisdom and pleasure can be derived from them:)

Very well done on both the format and the wording in this!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Meena
What a wonderful piece you have penned. I always loved reading and could get lost in time in a good novel. Great job on the club challenge.
Love Cindy

This is an interesting form. I love the rhythm. The topic is one many can relate to. It is so nice to get lost in a good book.