Comments : The Ghost Of You (unfinished)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Silent, I feel this is perfect as it is as it's short, simple but straight to the point that lingering is the smell, thoughts and touch of this person because they meant so much to you.

    I spotted a few typos and hope you don't mind my corrections...
    You run threw my
    ^^
    threw should be through

    I hear you foot step
    ^^
    you should be your and foot step should be footsteps

    All the best, Em