Comments : Today...

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Faith in God is the most important thing we have. We may not always understand why things happen but if we pray and turn them over to Him, it lightens the burden. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful write...
    we should believe in god and ourselves too ...

    just a suggestion:
    //Don't know what it, has in store//
    try using comma after 'what'... it makes the read more easy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin what a beautiful poem of faith and insperation.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    We have to live each day as it comes. We may not go back to "yesterday" at least we shouldn't. We should not rewalk the paths we have crossed, yet proceed forward and look forward to the next day. We should proceed to the future. I really loved how you expanded on that idea; I could feel a sense of optimism in your words. Loved this.. you did great!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    A unique and flawless piece. 5/5, Em