Very powerful and deep poem, each word so full of raw intense emotion, Beautifully written, such pain and hurt in every line. Excellent.

Hope your life was not as the poem very harrowing, full of self pity and sadness. I would never have settled for the kid abuse I would have got on with it as you seemed to do and played life one day at a time gathering strength from the good and pushing aside the bad.
See you got to me with this poem and we all have bad days but bad years how sad. A vividly expressive poem that drew me along and won me over on your side, worth a 5/5 for it contents your sadness. Ray S

A great piece that kept my attention throughout the entire poem! Just one little thing i'd like to mention though, your rhyme with the word "soul" being used somewhere near the middle of the poem kind of threw off my flow, perhaps because I just saw the same word being used a stanza before, but other then that, a great piece once again!

5/5

keep it up my friend!

God how most can relate to your poems, i love it, it has a lot of truth to it about how teens can be so horrible (i should kno i am one) and it can make someones life miserable because of it great write 5/5