"I like pain can't you see, i have proof from all tha scars on me."

- I know what yu mean.

Great work,
5/5

Awww this is sad. I enjoyed it though. Great work. Nik

Great poem. I thought the dark emotion and pain that came through was great, although it felt a little stagnant, like it was really being felt but remembered at the time of writing. Still a great poem though, the desire for " the end" was obvious. :)

I luv this poem soooo sad but sooo goood lol

Such an emotional piece, 5/5. Em

Emotional, and has something that I can relate to so amazing poem all in all haha.
5/5