A poem full of so much emotion! Loved how it was full of pain in the begining then got to grips with reality in the middle and victory at the end. Well done! 5/5

Wow is all I can say.. *Claps*

Wow this is a really powerful poem.. as i began reading it.. i thought.. wow i could really relate to this with my last relationship.. but then as i continued reading i realized it was about a father.. and its amazing how you can relate to it no matter what the situation.. great job! and so full of emotion.. nicely written :)
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So much of us can relates to this poem, even during our teenage years. I like it, kel.

Sounds like one of them situations where one would say ' words cant express what it was like' and you pulled it off..one of the best ones i have seen yet..Great job!