Short but awesome work... Full with sad feedings from start to end...
Great job at all

A very emotional piece in so few words. I think you expressed yourself well here and really made it clear that you were hurt. Keep it up. Nik

This is really beautiful and very emotional. Well done, 5/5. Em

Short, but very powerful. I love the rhyming and the overall flow of this poem. It's crisp and to the point.

You would have to write something completely amazing in a poem with 5 lines in order to get a 5 from me. I don't always look to quality of the poem as much as I do effort and time. This piece just has little effort and even less time put into it. I would have given it a 3 but I won't down vote so if you want the rating message me.